Monday, September 7, 2009

Thesis Statement

While many, if not all, of the characters' pasts affect their outlook on the war, Jimmy Cross' past experiences and love for Martha affect his capabilities as a leader in the war and eventually lead to his lapse in concentration and loss of a soldier which alters his perspective on the present war and on his future life.

1 comment:

  1. Grammatical note: 'affect' has an 's' and 'lead' should be either 'leading' or 'leads'.

    Your thesis: Jimmy Cross' love for Martha affects his capabilities as a leader. What universal 'truth' does this represent?

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